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redwolf ([personal profile] redwolf) wrote in [community profile] labyfic2024-10-15 07:34 pm

Drabble #179: Mysterious

...we had a nice response to the drabble prompt of Drabble 178, with entries by [personal profile] apachefirecat and [personal profile] redwolf and comments by [personal profile] apachefirecat and [personal profile] redwolf

For this prompt, we continue with our one-word/phrase drabble roots:

Mysterious

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Word count: # of words
$your_beautiful_drabble

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Truths

[personal profile] apachefirecat 2024-10-20 02:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Word Count: 500

There was such vulnerability in his eyes that when he at last stopped talking, relating the secrets of his own childhood to her, Sarah's heart ached all the more. She had often wondered about her husband's past, how he had come to be the Goblin King and if he had at first been stolen himself. She was not surprised at the latter, but her heart broke to realize how thoroughly unwanted he had been as a baby, a pain that had clearly shadowed his life for a very long time. "Well?" Jareth asked and forced out a rough bark of laughter.

Sarah blinked, forcing back her own tears of compassion as she focused on the unspoken needs in his eyes. His beautiful eyes, which had always looked to be two colors but which she had only just discovered had held physical trauma as well as more trauma than should ever be visited on any child. "The mysteries are over, Sarah." His voice was growing cold and hard, and Sarah realized he was preparing to distance himself from her.

She moved quickly, closing the distance that he had placed between them as he had been relating his own tale to her. Her hands caught his face, and he did not move. She witnessed unshed tears glittering in his beautiful eyes. "Your mother," she spoke with vehemence, "was a stupid bitch not to want you."

Looking back later, she would come to realize this as the moment that she actually forgave her own father. Her mother could have easily fought to keep her in her life. Instead, she'd chosen to leave her with her father and her new stepmother to chase after her dreams of stardom. At least she had not surrendered her without second thought to a kingdom of Goblins in hopes of gaining wealth and power. Jareth's mother had sought to become royalty through any means, but it was Jareth who was truly King. Sarah would also wonder later what had become of his mother and hope that she had met a fitting end.

But right now, in this moment, her only concern was comforting the man she had come over their years together to love. She stroked his cheeks as she stared into his eyes, willing him to see the truth of her words. "You are wanted now. You're revered now!" She lifted one hand from his tender flesh to passionately wave at the magical kingdom around them.

"I am feared now!" he snapped, turning his head from her. It had always been better to be feared than to be pitied or beguiled.

"By some, yes," she admitted, gently turning his face back to her, "but not by all. I love you, Jareth -- "

"And knowing the truth behind my strengths, behind my power does not -- "

"I did not fall in love with you for your power!" she snapped more harshly than intended, but then stroked his cheek. "I love you for you." Her lips pledged her own truths.



The End
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Re: Truths

[personal profile] apachefirecat 2024-10-27 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
<3 It's always hard to get pass childhood traumas, especially when it comes to abuse from a parental or other trusted figure, but it seems to me almost that guys have it worst. Being, in part, that it's a lot more acceptable for women to be led by their emotions, but guys are always expected to be the strong, silent, stalwart types and not allow for past hurts to continue to make them ache so.