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...we had a nice response to the drabble prompt of Drabble 116, with entries by [personal profile] redwolf and me (your intrepid drabble proposer [personal profile] jalenstrix), and commenting love by us both as well. Hurrah! Again special labyfic love to [personal profile] redwolf for adding entries for many previous drabble prompts. Very fun reads!





For this prompt, we continue with our one-word/phrase drabble roots:

Balance

What's in balance, out of balance, or needs to be balanced? Has someone lost their balance or perhaps is trying to regain it? Does something have a balance that needs to be paid? Tell us all about it. Labyfic-style, of course.

Proposer's note July 13: I only just realized we did this prompt pretty recently in February. My apologies! (I blame postpartum brain and sleep deprivation from triplets and a toddler.) At any rate, I'll try to actually pick a prompt we haven't done so recently before (or at all) for next time.



Given our entries from recent months, let's continue with the suggested limit for this month of 500 words. Though remember that shorter pieces are most definitely welcome!

Your entry should take the following format, posted as a comment on this entry:
Word count: # of words
Drabble: $your_beautiful_drabble


I'll aim to get the next drabble challenge out on the first Friday of next month (August 5).

I'm also very happy to take suggestions if something in particular strikes your fancy -- comment on this post or PM me with your suggestions. You can see our current collected suggestions here.


Remember: Feedback is LOVE. So do reply to your fellow labyficcers' drabbles if so inclined. (Though be careful of concrit unless specifically okayed by the author beforehand.)

Disruption

2022-07-12 10:03 (UTC)
redwolf: (bowie)
- Posted by [personal profile] redwolf
Word count: 500
Drabble:

Market day in Goblin City was always a cacophony of sound, a riot of colours and smells. People came from across the kingdom to sell and barter their wares, to trade gossip and exchange ideas. The chess set were Sarah’s escorts for the day.

Jareth had been correct about the castle’s goblins being enamoured with her after the recent assassination attempt and Rook was running interference. She was following Sarah and Bishop in wolf form with a large number of small goblins riding her like a fairground pony. Whenever one slid off her back, it would run ahead of the enormous wolf so she could flip it back into position with a quick nudge from her snout.

Sarah loved wandering the stalls to see what was in season. The crops destined for export she knew from trade negotiations, but the tiny family orchards and farms always brought in something interesting.

Bishop was at her side providing information on any unfamiliar produce and whether it had culinary uses, was edible or toxic to some or all races, or if it had craft, medicinal or magical applications.

Aside from the educational aspect of the markets, Sarah was working her way through the food stalls. She was almost bouncing in excitement when she spotted one of her favourites. An elf family from a village to the north of the Labyrinth were master bakers and confectioners and, as their product range was based on seasonal availability, it was always a surprise to see which treats they were selling.

A large selection of the delicacies were purchased and Sarah magicked most of them back to the castle. She would have loved to share them with Jareth, but he could sniff out dessert faster than a bloodhound and she had ways of managing a husband on a sugar high that were almost as delightful. Bishop thanked the stallholder and they continued on their way.

“I thought that was something between couples, but it’s a British thing, isn’t it?”

“What’s that, love?” Bishop passed her a sugar dusted cake.

“Love, darling, sweetheart.” Sarah closed her eyes, groaning as her taste buds rejoiced.

“It’s just polite.” Bishop moved her out of the path of a cart being pulled by a pair of goats. “But there’s also context.”

“Like when the three of you call each other more colourful names?” Sarah stepped over a fresh goat deposit.

“Very much so.” He flashed his sharp toothed grin.

Everyone looked up in response to a troll yelling at a stallholder, a rail thin man who looked frozen in fright.

Bishop caught Sarah’s elbow to halt her as Rook slipped swiftly past them. She reached the disturbance and stood as a human, her goblin riders swarming the troll to bother it out of the way. Rook wrapped her arms around the man, who clung to her like she was a lifeline, before they both vanished.

“What was that about? That poor man looked shell shocked.”

“That’s fairly close to the truth, love.”

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