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jalenstrix ([personal profile] jalenstrix) wrote in [community profile] labyfic2018-01-03 12:01 am

Drabble #64: New


...we had a livelier response to the drabble prompt of Drabble 63, with entries by the wondrous [personal profile] wordrevolt, me (your intrepid drabble proposer [personal profile] jalenstrix), the fabulous [personal profile] ghislaine, and the terrific [personal profile] 3iggy. We were also more lively on the commenting love, with encouraging words by the terrific [personal profile] 3iggy, me, and the fabulous [personal profile] ghislaine.

Huzzah to my dear labyfic collective! I love you all!!



For this prompt, we continue with our one-word drabble roots, taking inspiration from the turning of the year:

New

What’s new? Or who? Why? Tell us all about it. You know you want to.




I continue to enjoy the 300 word limit, so let's continue with it for this month. Though remember that shorter pieces are most definitely welcome!

Your entry should take the following format, posted as a comment on this entry:

Word count: # of words
Drabble: $your_beautiful_drabble



I'll aim to get the next drabble challenge out on the first Friday of next month (Feb 2).

I'm also very happy to take suggestions if something in particular strikes your fancy -- comment on this post or PM me with your suggestions. You can see our current collected suggestions here.


Remember: Feedback is LOVE. So do reply to your fellow labyficcers' drabbles if so inclined. (Though be careful of concrit unless specifically okayed by the author beforehand.)
ghislaine: white dress (Romeo and Juliet)

[personal profile] ghislaine 2018-01-12 06:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Word count: 294

Drabble:

“What the hell?”

Wedged into Sarah’s copy of Romeo and Juliet was an envelope with Sarah's name scrawled on the front. Sarah was about to practice her audition lines for this year’s school play. The letter was short, but to the point: “Sarah, I have a crush on you. You probably haven’t noticed me. After all, I’m new, and a year below you. At any case, I’m auditioning for Romeo and Juliet, so I’ll see you then.” And it was unsigned.

Sarah frowned. She had no idea who this person could be, but she’d been made fun of by the kids in her high school before in similar ways. She was auditioning tomorrow, and she didn’t need this distraction. Sarah tore the letter and envelope in half...

Sarah didn’t let her nervousness show for a minute. She’d braided her long black hair with silver ribbons and worn a romantic poet blouse. She’d already memorized the lines. She waited for the guy auditioning as Romeo to come onto the stage. Her pulse was pounding in anticipation. This was ridiculous.

Then, he came out of the shadows. He was on the thin side, with longish choppy black hair, and he wore a black jacket and jeans. He looked like he probably listened to Christian Death and The Cure. He started right into the play with a jarring forthrightness. He wasn’t reading from a script, either. Chin up, Sarah came right back with her lines, but she felt her face growing hot. Was this him? Damn it, it just did not matter. But a new passion crept into her own voice. She had a synchronicity with him that made the play come alive around them.

“Hey,” she heard him murmur as she turned away, finished, “great job."
Edited 2018-01-12 18:07 (UTC)
ghislaine: white dress (Myoubi)

[personal profile] ghislaine 2018-01-14 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much for your kind words!
ghislaine: white dress (Myoubi)

[personal profile] ghislaine 2018-01-14 06:46 pm (UTC)(link)
Hilarious! Jareth's restrained wrath is so spot-on. Those goblins really should have more faith in Jareth's own romantic prowess.
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[personal profile] 3iggy 2018-01-16 11:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I quite literally laughed out loud! Oh geeze, that’s wonderfully clever and funny.
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[personal profile] 3iggy 2018-01-16 11:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Very intrigued! Be there Goblin mischief afoot?!
ghislaine: white dress (Myoubi)

[personal profile] ghislaine 2018-01-21 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks so much! I wonder! I hope to pursue the matter further.
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[personal profile] redwolf 2023-06-06 11:07 am (UTC)(link)
So many possibilities 🦊🧡
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[personal profile] redwolf 2023-06-06 11:10 am (UTC)(link)
Oh dear. They meant well, but I think I could do without that sort of assistance 🦊🧡
redwolf: (bowie)

Invective

[personal profile] redwolf 2023-06-06 11:11 am (UTC)(link)
Word count: 500
Drabble:

Sarah stood beside Bishop as they watched a pair of guardians spar. She shook her head when he nodded towards the combatants and they left the training room together.

“When you came Underground did you have a sense of something missing?”

Bishop graced her with a Cheshire Cat grin. “When you beat the Labyrinth, was there a tall–” Sarah raised an eyebrow. “--dark and handsome stranger missing from your life.” She snorted at the question but shook her head. “There’s your answer, love. The connection seems to be part of the Labyrinth’s geas and it didn’t manifest until we were in the same place.”

That was a sound theory to Sarah’s mind, although she wondered if even Jareth understood the machinations of the Labyrinth. They walked throughout the castle and its grounds as Bishop pointed out the guardians who’d recently rotated from Above. While there was an undercurrent of safety from all of them, none of them held the same connection she had immediately felt with Bishop.

“I thought it might be Rook’s brother.” Bishop’s coat swirled around his legs as they walked through the gardens. “He bears the Labyrinth’s mark.” He tapped a finger under his left eye to indicate the partial heterochromia that all of the guardians bore. “But he’s both a little young to be called and he’s married.”

“Wouldn’t the Labyrinth call them both?” Sarah stopped to admire a bloom.

Bishop shrugged. “There’s no precedent, but it would be a poorly timed tactic to bring on someone who is both relatively young and who would have potentially contradictory priorities.”

“The Labyrinth does not strike me as an entity that would compromise people that way,” Sarah agreed.

They both started at a loud commotion coming from nearby and increased their pace to investigate. Sarah was surprised to see Rook sitting on a bench beside a woman she didn’t recognise. It was the woman who was waving her hands about wildly as she unleashed a torrent of invective. “Is that Italian?” Sarah whispered, smiling broadly as Bishop nodded. “I have no idea why, but that is surprisingly hot.”

Bishop’s laughter distracted the woman and halted her tirade. “You’re not the only one to think so.” A subtle nod towards the castle showed several other guardians watching the show. He strode forward and pulled the woman into a hug, before turning back to Sarah. “Allow me to introduce Angel, she’s Erich’s partner.”

“So you’re Jareth’s Queen.” Angel looked Sarah over and grinned broadly. “He always did have good taste.”

Sarah was surprised to hear a broad Brooklyn accent from the woman who had been swearing in fluent Italian. She was about Rook’s height, had long, wavy, dark hair and was dressed in yoga pants and a loose, wide necked tee that had slipped to expose a shoulder. Looking between Bishop and Angel, it felt as if a piece she hadn’t realised was missing had settled in her heart. “I think we’ll be getting to know each other quite well.”
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Re: Invective

[personal profile] ghislaine 2023-06-06 11:20 pm (UTC)(link)
I love the characterizations and building of relationships! Even though it's a short scene, you brought the scene to life enough for me to be able to feel immersed in it.
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Re: Invective

[personal profile] redwolf 2023-06-07 09:38 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! There's a bunch of these that are all loosely connected, but they're all over the place in the comment threads based on which prompt I feel like working with at the time 🦊🧡