Drabble #61: Disguise

[jalenstrix]

...we had a quieter response to the drabble prompt of Drabble 60, with entries by the tremedous 3iggy and me (your intrepid drabble proposer jalenstrix). We were bolstered by the commenting love of the labyfic collective, represented this past month by imhilien, me, and 3iggy.

Mwah, my fabulous labyfic collective! Your drabbles and comments continue to warm my heart.


For this prompt, we continue with our one-word drabble roots, taking inspiration from the Halloween season:

Disguise

Who's in disguise? Why? What's the disguise? Is it any good? Teeeeeeellll meeeeeeee.....




As I've been thoroughly enjoying the 300 word limit, let's continue with it for this month. Though remember that shorter pieces are most definitely welcome!

Your entry should take the following format, posted as a comment on this entry:

Word count: # of words
Drabble: $your_beautiful_drabble



I'll aim to get the next drabble challenge out on the first Thursday of next month (Nov 2).

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[jalenstrix]

Word count: 298
Drabble:

I looked at Jareth, struggling to find appropriate words. “That….is not a very good disguise.”

“What? What’s wrong with it?”

I closed my eyes briefly. “You do realize that the purpose of a disguise is to blend in. To be unnoticed. That property is, for instance, what makes a disguise different from, say, a costume one might wear to, say, a masquerade.”

He removed the pearlescent feathered mask with a somewhat sheepish air. “I thought you said this was a formal affair.”

“Business affair. I said it was a business affair.”

He shrugged a shoulder gleaming with diamond-bright threads. “Same thing.”

“Maybe from where you’re from. Here, that means two piece suite, preferably not tailored to you like a glove. No, don’t you make that face at me. I told you part of this job was surveillance and you, as I distinctly recall, said fine.”

“I would never agree to such a travesty.”

“Do I really need to bring out the contract again?” I kept it as a file on my smartphone for just these occasions. It was sadly not surprising how often he tried to wriggle out of some of the more useful clauses.

“You’re a cruel woman.”

“Uh huh. I’m waiting.”

He flicked a hand up and down once, and the gorgeous shimmering body-hugging something he’d come dressed in melted away into an off-the-rack gray suit.

“And the tie. No Zegna. I mean it. Those patterns are eye-catching.”

Another long suffering sigh, another hand flick, and then a very disgruntled goblin king stood next to me in Government Worker chic.

“Much better. And that expression of sour boredom is perfect. Let’s go.”

“I repeat: you are a cruel woman, Sarah Williams.”

“Quit your whining, your majesty. We’ve places to go and bad people to surveil.”

[3iggy]

O! I missed the Drabble! I had checked for postings but never saw it! Poor Jareth, however, I’m sure he would still look arresting in a boring suit. You can’t hide glamorous..

[jalenstrix]

Very true about hiding glamorous. :D

[redwolf]

I don't think it's possible for Jareth to not stand out regardless of attire.

Perhaps Sarah should have let him stay in his glorious something and used him a distraction. There's a fan theory that James Bond, who is so terribly unsubtle, is actually an overt method of distraction to cover for the real spies 🦊🧡